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Author Confessions: YA Fantasy Author Charity Mae - You know what bugs me in books, movies, and TV shows? + giveaway

Author Confession with Charity Mae

You know what bugs me in books, movies, and TV shows? How badly they show what real social ballroom dancing looks like. I know it’s silly, but one thing not a lot of people know about me is I love ballroom dancing. So when a movie either shows what is clearly a choreographed piece or really fake ballroom dancing, it bugs me.

So how should it be done? Glad you asked! I use dancing, most of all ballroom dancing, as a tool in my Enthronement series quite a bit. I won’t claim I was perfect, and I may have confused some readers, but I was not letting that badly done trope be that messy in my book, no sir.

What Dance Scenes Get Wrong
The first thing they get wrong, most commonly, are those spectacular dances you see. I’m looking at The Mask of Zero and Disney’s Enchanted. Now I love these scenes, I wouldn’t change them, but it does bug me that there are two extremes. These clearly rehearsed scenes or the second more grievous sin.

Doing nothing but the basic! The waltz is just a traveling box step. Though animated movies get a pass for the most part, think of Disney’s Cinderella where Cinderella and the prince just kind of hold each other and spin around. Now that can be used well, most of all for moments when you need to let the characters chat, but in real social ballroom, no dancer worth their salt would do nothing but a basic the whole time.

What Dance Scenes Get Right
There are many different kinds of social dances. The movies that get them right the most are those that come from Jane Austin movies. Though stiff, it shows one part of social ballroom dance quite well. This is where the dance is basic so anyone could learn and dance it (unless they really are terrible dancers). They were the most common for that time.

Another great example is the sweet dance scene in The Sound of Music. Where Maria and the Count had learned the dance before and knew how to do the full piece from memory. This is what social dancing used to be like. And guess what, it is today too! If you take one lesson, by that evening you could do a dance at least as good as that one even if you have two left feet. It’s fun and not that serious.

How Should It Be Done?
If you’re going to do a big fancy dance, let us know why or where the characters learned it. Not to tout my own horn, but in The Enthronement the prince makes it clear he’s studied dance for a long time and Kascia is a professional dancer. So, it’s easy for the audience to know how they know the dances.

The other thing they miss is most social dancing is done like it is done in The Sound of Music. The dancers know it ahead of time and so know how to do it. Or you can do it like social ballrooms are done today.

Line of Dance: I have only seen one movie that shows the line of dance. That was Fox’s animated movie Anastasia. During “Once Upon a December” and the opening party, if you watch the dancers, they are using the line of dance.

What is the line of dance? It’s the circle traveling used to travel without bumping into each other. This is most common in dances like the waltz.

If you’re going to dance slower, you dance closer to the center of the ballroom and go around in a circle counterclockwise.

If you’re dancing faster, you go to the further edge of the ballroom in the counterclockwise circle.

I wish more books, movies, and shows showed this as it’s what we do today when you go to a ballroom social.

I also would be delighted if they showed dances that were fun and show a lot of unique steps (just not the basic over and over!) but not so complicated it’s clearly choreographed. If you want to see what this looks like, check out this video: The video is not great! And of course, for a movie, I would hope they make it look a little better, but you see how you see basic and then the more advanced moves here and there.

Is it a dumb pet peeve? Probably. But does it bug me? Yes. I love ballroom in all its beautiful social aspects, and I wish it would be shown for how easy it is for anyone to do. More people could really learn to dance like this and enjoy it. That’s why it bugs me. I think anyone can learn and have fun. They may not be great, but anyone could enjoy it.

Thank you for letting me join you and rant! If you want to see how I write ballroom dancing, get your own copy of The Enthronement wherever ebooks are sold.

(All image are free for commercial use from Pixabay though no attribution is required)

The Enthronement (Book One)
by Charity Mae
6 September 2022

Genre: Young Adult Fantasy/Romance
Publisher: Knighted Phoenix Publishing
ISBN: 978-1-958797-01-3
Number of pages: 411
Word Count: 189,088
Cover Artist: Charity Mae
You'd think winning a princess test is easy. It's a lot harder when you have to kill the prize.

Becoming princess was always expected of Kascia Thorapple Custod. It's her duty as a Custod, but all she wants is her own perfect partner she's found in her arranged engagement. But duty gets in the way when the only way to end the five-hundred-year war between the kingdom of Purerah and the three rebel factions is for Kascia to join the Enthronement, enabling her to assassinate the royal family. Everything is on the line in this political romance as love and duty battle in ways she never expected.

A war taking place two-thousand years after Cedrick Custod freed their world from the dark sorcerer Heklis, fans of The Custod Chronicles will find something familiar and excitingly new in this latest installment to the Custod world.

I shut the door behind me as politely, and yet, as quickly as I can. My feet march on the path I know so well without much conscious thought. I need something concrete. I need an embrace to remind me what all this is for. And I know where to get it.

Normally, it’s from my Dad. But as that won’t work, I know who can fill the emptiness and fear I feel with warmth and hope.

I hug myself as I push past the trees, old berry bushes, and mossy stones until I reach our spot. Like the other night, the water sparkles in the moonlight and the lantern light.

Beside the lantern, sitting on the mossy rock that is our bench, waiting for me with a smile that lifts my heart like the rising sun, is Jake. I knew he would be. He opens his arms wide to me.

My heart lifts again. The smile escapes before I can process it. In moments, I’m engulfed in his loving embrace. I smile and hide in it. I shut my eyes and listen to Jake’s breathing and heartbeat.

In my life, that sound was one of the few things that was truly mine. I adore my music and dance, but they are not mine, but my mother’s and the theater’s. I relish in fencing and my swordplay, but that’s Dad’s. Jake's warmth, his embrace, and his love are mine, and mine alone.

And Dad wants me to betray the one thing that is mine.

My heart sinks at the thought, but then Jake hugs me tighter, squeezing the despair out of me. He chuckles at my delight, making my heart sing. Oh, how I love that feeling. I soak it in along with the sound of his breath, the tinkle of the river, the distant rush of the seaside. I take in the scent of the evening air on Jake’s clothes, the smell of his breath, the mossy scent in the air. I can hide here and enjoy the one thing that is mine. The thing I can’t betray. I’m reminded of how I had the strength to reject my Dad though I never had before.

“Even after all your work during the day, your hair always smells so sweet,” Jake says.

“Like coconut and the sea.”

“We do live next to the ocean,” I point out, delighting in this banter.

Jake smiles. “Yes, but you are far more beautiful. I can’t wait to enjoy it more once we’re married.”

He entwines his fingers with mine, playing with each finger as I had his earlier. He plays with the ring on my right hand most. It’s our secret bond to one another.

It’s of two hands reaching for a heart in the center with a crown on the top. I wear it with the heart pointing inward to show I am taken, but wearing it in this manner meant only dating to most. But not to us. We know what it meant. He wears one like it, only his is pure silver. Mine has an opal in the heart. It is a tradition handed down by my family. And it suits our secret engagement well.

I sigh heavily as I watch Jake fiddle with my fingers. I had wanted to talk to him so badly about it, but now, I just want to avoid it. He is too busy kissing the tips of my fingers to notice my mood yet.

He pulls back just a bit, still smiling. “I brought something for you.”

I gasp in delight. “Jake, you didn’t?” But I hope he did.

Jake grins like a cat over milk and steps back to his bag. He pulls out exactly what I love most, a yellow cake with chocolate frosting, cream in the center, and a small blue flower on top. My eyes pop out in delight. That is an expensive and rare treat for a girl who is on a strict diet and small budget.

Jake laughs in pleasure. “Those blue eyes could outdo the sea for vastness when I bring you cake,” he says. “It’s worth every gemlet."

“Oh Jake, you’re the best!” I kiss him on the cheek in excitement, my heart brimming with happiness. How I love him. How he looks after me. How much he gives up for me.

“I know,” Jake sighs dramatically, making me giggle. “Come on then.” He sits on the rock, putting his arm out, so I can sit and lean against it.

I sit down and let him wrap his arms around my shoulders. I smile as he hand-feeds me bites, taking bits for himself now and then, but he gives me far more of it. I never let him not at least share a little. But it also means the world to me how he wants to give me the most.

I hold Jake’s arm around my shoulders, hanging my hands off arms almost like I am going to pull myself upon them as I lean against his chest and enjoy our shared treat.

I wish this would never end. The perfect sunset, the glitter of the water, the sweet treat, his warm arms around me. I just want to turn and kiss him, give him everything. But that’s not for today. We still have to wait. If I break my oath, we’d be in far worse trouble.

We finish the treat, and Jake puts the box aside. I lean deeper into his arms, holding him tight and sighing in contentment, shutting my eyes. I needed that. I wanted to vent to him when I came, but now, I just want to enjoy the moment.

I close my eyes, taking in all the smells, savoring the chocolate and cake flavor on my tongue, listening to Jake’s breath and the wonderful waterworks around us. This is heaven. I can’t betray this. I can’t lose this.

“How was your raid?” I ask in a relaxed tone, eyes still shut, wanting to forget why I’d come into this magical place so upset.

Jake’s exhausted sigh shakes me from my moment. I frown in concern for him. He sounds so tired. I turn to look at him as he lets his head plop back on the tree behind him.

“Not great,” he laments. “It wasn’t one of the Enthronement loads like we hoped. We hardly got enough to feed those who helped us, let alone help the others.”

I feel the sadness and weight that came with those words. Jake is dedicated to the Loyalist rebellion, most of all, in its efforts to feed those in the ranks who want to support themselves. He sounds worn already, and we aren’t even on the throne yet. My heart aches for the stress and exhaustion in his voice.

“We’ll figure it out.” I assure him.

“I just wish we knew how they were transporting all their money. They tax it. It should go right to them, right? How are they spending it if it never gets into the castle?” Jake scowls.
His frustration makes his breath hot, his arms tense, and his movements haphazard as he moves his free hand about. “We tried the sea. It’s not coming in there, and what we get in raids is nothing, hardly enough to feed the palace for a day. So, what in creation are they doing to get the money?”

I have no answers. I never do. I don’t think anyone does or we’d have tried it by now. I wish I was more helpful, but I feel useless when it comes to this kind of strategy. I would support Jake on the throne, but I feel much more confident in helping with orphanages and schools and programs to help people get jobs than... this.

“I just wish...” Jake sighs, all the anger draining out of him in a heavy sigh, “…we had enough. I’m so tired of looking at the small ones begging for food and... being powerless.” Jake drops his head.

I know what that means. They lost another child to illness or hunger or who knows what. Each one strikes Jake hard. We try, but... how can we help those starving children when we can hardly help ourselves?

“H-how many this time?” I ask as gently as I can, trying to comfort him and let him vent.

Jake swallows hard. “Five died in the last month,” his voice shakes. “We got three more. I don’t know how we’ll keep feeding them if we can’t find out how to get the money back from the royals.” Jake shakes his head. “We tried. It goes into that storehouse, and we attack all the carts going to the palace we can. And it’s always chump change. We feed our troops, sure, but that’s not the goal.” He lets his head fall against the tree, “I just want this life to be over.”

Well, I don’t want all of it over. I don’t want to give up my shows, but I know this means the world to Jake. And for him, I’ll give it up. I shut my eyes to dream of what it will be like.

But instead, all I can think about is Dad’s plan that would change everything. My heart drops, and I tense as if to defend the one dream I was allowed to have for myself.

Jake frowns. “What’s wrong?”

“Nothing,” I say too fast.

“Kascia.” I hear the hint of a scold in Jake’s voice as I stare into the running water. “We both know it’s not nothing. Something’s wrong.”

I sigh heavily and hold him tighter. “Nothing, just...” I try to find the words to dismiss it,

“It’s not really important right now.”

“So are you saying that to assure me or avoid it?” Jake asks carefully.

I have to admit I’m not even sure. I bite my lip. If I don’t tell him, does that make it as if it won’t happen? Maybe if Mom agrees with me, but she didn’t seem to at dinner. Would I ever find a way out of this? Maybe if Jake doesn’t agree, I’ll have a leg to stand on. Why I felt I had to talk to him at all, but I don’t want to lose this magic. “I love you.” I choose to say instead.

“Kascia, what’s the matter? Did something happen today?”

I nod, biting my lip harder and taking a deep breath to hold in the anger and pain. “Yes, but it’s not something we need to talk about now.”

“If it upsets you, we do,” Jake disagrees. “That’s how we got over ourselves, remember?” He smiles playfully.

“I screamed I didn’t like you. Then we realized we had something in common. Took years.”

Jake smiles. “You were worth waiting for.”

He kisses me deeply; I suck it in. Dad can’t take this. He can’t take the thrill I feel as the energy of that kiss rushes through me, or the intoxicating dizziness I feel at his touch, or the pleasurable press of his lips on mine, and the delightful soft bite of his lips on mine. He just can’t take it. I won’t let him.

“So, tell me,” Jake says when he pulls back, “what is bothering you? Saying it and screaming at each other is always better. You can throw anything at me. I’ll take it.”

“It’s not you,” I insist, grunting in annoyance.

“I didn’t mess up?”

“No,” I kiss him to assure him, “not this time.”

I kiss him deeper, harder. He grins and puts his other arm around me as I push myself up a bit to kiss him better, again and again, sucking his lips into mine, turning and releasing his arm to put one hand to his cheek, while I hook my other hand to his shoulder, keeping him close. I run my hand through his hair on the way to the back of his head. I press closer, almost sitting on his lap.

How I adore him. How he looks after me. How he makes me feel. His strong chest so close to mine. His breath against my skin. How his thick lashes tickle my face as I turn to get at his lips. His arm wraps around my waist. I all but dig into him, kissing him harder and harder, encouraging him to hold me tighter. This is what I wouldn’t give up.

Jake falls for it. He always does, then again, so do I when he tries it. He returns my intensity and fights for that passion too. We struggle for the feeling, relishing every bit of it we dredge up.

I gasp as he switches from kissing my lips to kissing the round of my shoulder. I shut my eyes and relax a little as he kisses down my arm, inch by inch, until he reaches my hand and presses his lips to it, holding it closer to him. I sigh again, eyes fluttering at his touches. I want more of his touch. I want that touch more than anything.

I leap forward and kiss his jaw, yanking his face to mine, bringing him down with me. Jake returns it, kissing me again, and again. I feel myself tilt back as he gets into it.

“Kascia,” he breathes. I love his breath on my skin.

“What?” I ask, kissing his cheek.

“I can’t ever get enough,” he sighs heavily.

“Have enough,” I tease.

“We know better. We’ll lose what made our fathers agree,” he reminds me.

This floods me with anger. Who cares anymore!? Maybe if we just caved in, Dad couldn’t make me lose my whole life again. “I don’t care what he wants!” I snap and kiss him harder.

“Woah.” Jake pulls away and puts a hand to my cheek to hold me back. “Kascia, what is that?”

I hate him for denying me this. I push him away, turning my back to him. I fold my arms tightly and don’t turn around, pulling into myself as if to protect myself.

“Kascia?” Jake frowns deeply. “What’s really going on? What did your father do?”

“You don’t care,” I snarl back.

“Yes, I do.” Jake runs a hand down my arm, starting at the round of my shoulder again. I shut my eyes. Yes, touch, his touch it’s all I want. Dad can’t take it.

I shut my eyes as tears come. “Will you all take it?”

“Take what?” Jake kisses my cheek from behind.

I adore that. I turn to him to kiss him hard, but Jake holds me back. “What is it?” he asks.

I roar in frustration and shove him away. “He can’t take it,” I insist. “So why must you?”

“What am I taking?” Jake asks. “I love you.”

“Do you?”

Jake smiles gently and pulls me closer like a toddler refusing to sit next to her parents and puts his arm around me again, kissing my cheek. I lean into it. I need it.

“Yes, I do,” he assures me. “You can throw anything at me.”

“The only thing I need to throw at you is me.” I don’t want to discuss Dad taking him from me. Even if the plan is to go back to him, I couldn’t be gone that long. And we’d never gotten into the castle. No rebel had in my lifetime.

“You normally are good at taking no for an answer, just like I do when I get too intense.”

Jake rubs my shoulders. “I’m not pulling away, Kascia. Just keeping our rule. What’s the change?” He kisses my shoulder and neck.

“He wants to end it.” I finally admit as hot tears come.

“End us?” Jake laughs.

I turn to him in shock. He’s laughing at this?!

“That’s not what the plan means,” Jake is still laughing.

“Excuse me?” I snap. “You know?”

“He proposed his plan to get us inside, right?” Jake asks, still smiling at me like an overreacting child.

“Which is?” He can’t know, can he?

“To use the Enthronement to get a girl on the inside,” Jake says. “And as you’re the best princess we know. It’s why I love you,” he adds, “he figures you’ll get in, piece of cake.”

I gape at him. “What?” I can’t believe this. “You knew he wanted me?”

“Who better?” Jake asks innocently.

“Do you not understand what the Enthronement is?” I demand, pulling away to see him better.

My anger mounts, but it’s just to cover up the hint of fear. I feel my heart stilling, afraid it’s going to have to deal with the hints of a crack that are threatening to form depending on the answer I’m about to get.

“A contest to prove yourself a true princess?” Jake looks at me as if I’m crazy.

“With what goal?” I demand.

“Uh, for you, it doesn’t matter. You’ll let us in before it’s even over.”

“And you think courting the prince isn’t part of that?”


“So!” I clench my fists and stand up as the flood of emotions rises in me, wanting to break out like a stormy tide against a coastal wall. One wave is anger; how could he not understand!? The next: desperation, he had to be thick because if he isn’t, the last wave strikes: fear.

It was an old fear I’d not thought about in many years. So buried I’d all but forgotten about it until this moment. That the love we’d built was forced so unreal. Did this mean what I’d feared, deep down, for so long, our love was manufactured, fake, unnatural?

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Charity Mae lives near Mt. Shasta in Northing California and loves the nature there (though she’d like some more snow and rain). She wrote her first 700+ book when she was eleven-year-old and published her first book when she was twenty-one.

When she’s not reading and writing, she enjoys making and watching YouTube videos, gaming, hiking, swimming, and sitting outside while working on projects.

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  1. Congratulations on your release of The Enthronement, Charity Mae, I enjoyed this post, the excerpt and I enjoyed following the tour and learning about your book, which sounds like a lovely book for my granddaughter to enjoy and I love the cover! Good luck with your book and I hope the tour was a success!

    Thanks for sharing it with me and have a terrific day!