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Monday, February 18, 2013

D. A. Adams Between Dark and Light tour + giveaway

What do red wheel barrows and white chickens have in common with writing? Author D. A. Adams is going to tell you!
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In my Comp II classes, I teach the famous poem “The Red Wheelbarrow” by William Carlos Williams:

so much depends

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upon 

a red wheel

barrow 

glazed with rain

water 

beside the white

chickens. 

For this guest post, I want to apply my interpretation of this poem to writing. First, let’s start with the rain, which for this example illustrates the trials and tribulations of life. For a writer, these can include rejections, bad reviews, self-doubt, personal struggles, and even creative dry spells. In the poem, the rain has moved on, leaving the wheelbarrow “glazed” with the remnants of those hard times. If you want to be a writer, expect the rain. Count on it. We all go through these difficulties in some form or another.
A wheelbarrow is a useful device that innovated and revolutionized human existence. Today, it seems quaint and provincial, but few technological advancements have changed humanity quite so profoundly and remained in use for as long. Anyone who has ever worked on a farm or a construction site can attest. If we think of it as a metaphor for a type of person, a wheelbarrow is someone who gets things done. If we apply this to writing, it’s a person who sits down and goes about the daily chore of writing. 

The color red can symbolize many things, but for our purposes here, let’s imagine blood. The wheelbarrow is red because it has withstood the rains and rusted, in effect becoming bloodied. Anyone who chooses to enter this arena will get battered, bruised, and bloodied in some form or another. Take Stephen King, one of the most successful and prolific writers of this time. Listen to his stories about starting out, of being turned away from the writing program at Iowa, of piling up rejection letters before finally breaking through. He faced the rains, heard the criticisms, and developed his own sheen of rust. Like the wheelbarrow, he is scarred and bloodied, but from his perseverance, he found success.

The color white signifies purity. Typically, we associate purity as a form of virtue, but in this case, it has a negative connotation. The only way to keep something pure is never to use it. Collectors know this and shield their possessions to preserve the value. However, other than monetary worth, the possession has not lived up to its potential because it hasn’t been used for its intended task. For example, when I was a teenager, my grandfather bought a home photocopier to replicate some of his important documents. At that time, the machine was quite expensive, and he warned all of us not to use it because he didn’t want it broken. After he made his copies, he put the machine away, tucked back in its original packaging. When he passed away, the job of sorting through his possessions fell to me, and I found the copier under his bed. It was pristine, perfectly intact and functional. But it was obsolete. No one carried the ribbon it needed for printing, and other than as a novelty, it was useless. Papaw had made maybe fifty copies with it, and then, from fear of damaging it, never used it again. For someone aspiring to write, purity is a sin because anyone who chooses to write will immediately face criticism, usually harsh and scathing. The only way to avoid this is either never to write anything or never share that writing with anyone. Writing not shared is writing wasted, much like that obsolete photocopier.

The symbolism of the chickens is obvious. In nature, they are prey with virtually no defenses other than to dart quickly away from any potential danger. For our purposes, I’m going to divide the chickens into two categories. First, is the hand wringer, the person who out of fear of failure hides from the rain and never tries. Yes, they remain pristine and never have the rust of rejection and failure, but they also never know the satisfaction of accomplishment. While they can delude themselves with grand visions of how they could’ve been successful if this or that had happened, deep inside it will gnaw and nag at them, the not knowing. Someone who tries and fails will hurt deeply from that failure. But the pain eventually fades. It’s replaced by a calm certainty of knowing that at least they had the courage to try. They took the risk, and even though it didn’t work out as they had hoped, they can look themselves in the mirror without the nagging doubt, the lingering what if.

The second kind of chicken is the critic, the person who stands to the side and picks apart others’ efforts with a pretentious grandeur of how they would’ve done better. They dissect and disparage what has been done, while they themselves never create. Yes, they remain pristine, but as they age, their criticisms typically grow more bitter as the weight of their own cowardice presses inward. In this world, there are far more critics than doers, far more people who want to tear down others than step into the arena and face the rain. After the rain has passed, they’ll come out and peck for worms, but they themselves will never take on the hard tasks of doing. As Teddy Roosevelt said, “It is not the critic who counts: not the man who points out how the strong man stumbles or where the doer of deeds could have done better.” The critics, though more numerous, never do as much for society, for humanity, as the wheelbarrow who faces the rain and rusts. So much depends on a red wheelbarrow.

If you want to write, set aside your fears of failure, of judgment, of pain, of loss, of humiliation, and just go write. Get rusty. Fall down. Fail. Learn and try again. Shrug off those who say you can’t because more than likely the reason they are telling you that is because they are white chickens and are only expressing their own fears. Be brave and face the rain because even if you fail at least you’ll know and never have to hide in the shadows of what if. Every single person who has ever accomplished anything of value had to face doubt and uncertainty head on. Every writer who has ever shown their work to another person has faced some form of criticism. Don’t be a white chicken waiting for the rain to pass. Be a red wheelbarrow and wear your rust with pride.



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Between Dark and Light Book 4 of the Brotherhood of Dwarves Series

The stakes are higher than ever in the fourth installment of the popular dwarven saga!
The Great Empire has surrounded the Kiredurks and are preparing to conquer the kingdom, but unknown to them, Kwarck, the mysterious hermit of the plains, has his own plan in action. To the east, he has summoned an elven army and charged Crushaw with leading them into battle. To the south, Roskin will gather an army from the fractured Ghaldeon lands. But to the west, an ancient and powerful evil stirs.
The Great War is about to errupt, if Roskin can overcome the Dark One...


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About the Author:
D. A. Adams is a novelist, a farmer, a professor of English, and in my estimation, a true gentleman. His breakout fantasy series, The Brotherhood of Dwarves, transcends genre and illuminates the human soul in all its flashes of glory and innumerable failings.

He is active on the Con circuit and has contributed writing to literary as well as fine art publications, and maintains his active blog, "The Ramblings of D. A. Adams". He lives and works in East Tennessee, and is the proud father of two boys, Collin and Finn.

His ability as a storyteller breathes life into every character, and his craftsmanship as a writer makes these stories about relationships; human or otherwise.



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*did you notice the stanzas in the poem look like wheelbarrows?

Friday, April 6, 2012

Red Sky at Dawn, by D.A. Adams

Red Sky at Dawn is the next book in the Brotherhood of Dwarves series by D.A. Adams and released through Seventh Star Press. As my readers probably remember about a month ago I read the first book in this series, and while I had some hesitations about the book I was willing to read the next book in the series in the hopes that it would improve with time. Unfortunately I must confess that Red Sky at Dawn is giving me more apprehensions. There are still things I liked about this book and I am hoping that maybe this book in specific was just not Adams's finest book. I will definitely read the next book, The Fall of Dorkhun, and see where I feel about the series as a whole then, but otherwise I want to refrain from passing judgement right now.


For a short summary of the plot, Roskin, Crushaw and company continue to liberate slaves across orcish lands. Eventually they fight a pitched battle with an orc garrison and manage to leave orc lands forever. The freed slaves now begin the long trek home and Roskin encounters numerous obstacles on his path. Of course it is vitally important for Roskin to return home as soon as possible because his kingdom has gone to war with the ogres, their former allies, under allegations that the ogres sold Roskin into slavery. Negotiation has failed and only Roskin can exonerate the ogres and end the bloodshed that threatens to destroy his kingdom.


Before I get into the issues I have with this book, I want to talk about a few things that I liked about the book. First, I liked parts of the story being told from the orc perspective. We are introduced to an orc character named Suvene at the beginning of the novel and we get to see several events from his perspective. Although Suvene's story does not go a long way towards humanizing him, it gave me a valued insight into orcish society and the underlying societal problems of their class structure. Maybe with time we can begin to empathize with Suvene and understand his plight, however his character has not developed to that point.


I also liked that the kingdom of the Kiredurks and the ogre tribes are drawn into a war because the heir to the Kiredurk kingdom has gone missing. Roskin is a fairly important person within his own kingdom and for him to suddenly disappear, presumably sold into slavery, would have huge repercussions in his homeland. So I liked that Adams included that plotline.


Finally, I liked the large battle sequences in the novel, of which there were about two or three. I thought the battles had a degree of realism in terms of tactics and strategies which I appreciated. As a somewhat avid player of Medieval II: Total War, I have come to appreciate the difficulties of managing armies of knights and archers in the field. So at least that part of the book I found to be well-researched and enjoyable.


Unfortunately there are a lot of minor issues I had with Red Sky at Dawn which added up to deep concerns about the direction of this series. My first major issue is geography. I know that it's become a cliche for fantasy novels to have lovingly-detailed maps of the world in which they're taking place, and it's something that's been around since Tolkien. However when you create an entire world from scratch and take us from the orc lands to the marshwogg peninsula to the Koorline Forest, I like to have some sort of frame of reference. Now, some fantasy novels are able to get away without having a map, such as The Neverending Story and The Enchanted Forest Chronicles, but in those cases the references to geography were vague at best and ultimately irrelevant to the story, but in Red Sky at Dawn the geography is a major factor in the plot and so I would have liked some sort of reference to keep it all straight. I also bring up the map issue because two parties leave the same location heading for the same destination, however the second party which leaves much later than the first arrives at the destination ahead of the first party. This is explained in the book that the first party took a far more circuitous route, at which point I said to myself, "Man, I really wish I had a map so I could check that." Maybe there's a map in the paperback edition of this book, but since I only had the Kindle edition I felt like I was missing out.


The second issue I had with this book was the marshwoggs and the depiction of their society. Now, to expand a little just in book terms, the marshwoggs are a swamp-dwelling people with greenish-brown skin and webbed hands and feet, frog-people if you will. The marshwoggs live in a swampy peninsula, meaning no one's really interested in their land, and they have a sort of confederacy of small republics united in common defense but not much else. This is all very well and fine, but when Roskin encounters their system of government and taxation and compares it to the system in his home country is when I get problems. In his discussion of marshwogg politics, Roskin discovers that there is very little to no corruption in the marshwogg system, which is explained as a result of the very low salaries of government officials, as well as a system of checks and balances. Unfortunately I don't understand how low salaries would keep government officials from becoming corrupt, if anything I would think it would provide incentive for such corruption. It's not uncommon for government officials to use their positions of authority for their own financial gain, even if they're well-paid. Maybe I'm just a cynic when it comes to the behavior of sentient beings but I'm pretty sure there would be plenty of marshwoggs exploiting political office for financial reasons. I also was hesitant to accept that their capitalist system was far better than whatever system the dwarves have, in part because there wasn't an extensive explanation of how the dwarven economic system works and a comparison with the marshwogg system. It was simply mentioned that marshwoggs had more stores, more goods in those stores, and a greater variety of goods than in dwarven communities. On the one hand you can say that because of their economic policies the dwarves have entered a period of stagnation while the marshwoggs continue to expand and innovate. But on the other hand you could say the dwarves emphasize moderation and restraint while the marshwoggs are rampant consumerists. I just felt like Adams could have explored the issues a little better and built a stronger argument, instead I was left with the impression that the marshwogg system was better just because.


I also would have liked more exploration of the Kiredurk-ogre war happening in the north because Roskin has gone missing. There is a chapter towards the beginning that talks about the beginnings of the war and the attempts, at least by dwarven officials, to prevent this war from happening. However the ogres, for whatever reason, refuse to negotiate and war breaks out anyway. Finally towards the end of the book we see that the war has ground to a stalemate with heavy casualties on both sides and bitter feelings, however the return of Roskin might change that. The reason I bring this up is that in the book it is mentioned the ogres are not behaving as they usually do, which made me curious about why they were so hell-bent on going to war with the dwarves. Especially since they were long-time allies, much like the United States going to war with Canada. We've been friends for a really long time, going to war just doesn't make sense. We even meet some ogres in exile who refused to go to war with the dwarves so I feel like there is more to this war than Adams showed us in the book and I really hope the next book explores this issue more thoroughly.


My final problem with the book is it felt kind of haphazard. The introduction of Suvene, while useful, takes some focus off of Roskin and Crushaw. Focus which I felt could have been better utilized, especially when it came to the war. In addition a lot of travel happens off-screen, which is fine if nothing happens, but I was left feeling like this was just a string of events following each other rather than any sort of journey.


I definitely feel like this book was weaker than the previous one, and I hope that it just ends up being a fluke in the series. Unfortunately if you're also interested in reading this series you kind of have to read this one for plot purposes. I'll let my readers know how the third one turns out and probably make a decision then whether or not to continue with this series.


- Kalpar

Thursday, March 8, 2012

Sheep Review: Brotherhood of Dwarves, by D.A. Adams

As anyone who has ever played Dungeons & Dragons with me can attest, I love dwarves. I love their tendency towards the Lawful Good alignment, I love their dour outlook on life, I love their emphasis on tradition and history and the fact they're metallurgical experts is an added bonus. This strong preference for dwarves has brought me into conflict with numerous people, including Carvan who among his many English failings is a preference for elves. What with their prancing around the forest and being in harmony with nature and not being able to wear heavy armor because their brittle little bones snap like twigs. Hate elves. Where was I? Oh yes. So anyway, many fantasy books have dwarves or dwarf-like characters in their universes, but the dwarves are seldom the main character. And to an extent that makes sense because the majority of the fantasy-reading audience is human, so we like human main characters because they're easier to understand. However I recently found out that there is an entire series of fantasy books in which dwarves are the main characters. Needless to say, I was excited.


In the first chapter Adams provides some important setup for his fantasy world and divides the dwarves into three distinct ethnicities. To the south are the Tredjards, known for their black beards and their war-like disposition, the result of constantly fending off the attacks of orc slavers. In a sort of central location are the Ghaldeons with brown or red beards, and who are more focused on commerce and interaction with humans, ogres and the other dwarves than with fighting. However the Ghaldeons are in a distinct decline after many of their lands have been conquered by the human Great Empire. Finally to the north in relatively remote mountain ranges are the Kiredurks with mostly blond beards. The Kiredurks are not particularly warlike, instead focusing on history, art and the promotion of culture, and because they live in rather remote mountain ranges are largely ignored by enemies.  


The Brotherhood of Dwarves follows the adventures of Roskin, heir to the Kiredurk throne, although he is far from a conventional Kiredurk. Roskin's mother was actually an elf, which makes Roskin the first half-elf half-dwarf I have seen...well...ever. As a result Roskin has a black beard instead of the usual blond of the Kiredurks and is constantly beset with an urge for adventure and excitement which his kingdom simply does not provide. Fortunately for Roskin it is a tradition among the Kiredurks that each heir is given one year to sow their wild oats before they have to take up the mantle of leadership. Roskin decides to use his year to find a platinum statue, the titular Brotherhood of Dwarves, which represented the unity of the Kiredurk and Ghaldeon dwarves before it was taken by the Great Empire. Legend has it that the Brotherhood is in a secret vault of the fortress Black Rock and the general who built that fortress has recently been exiled. If Roskin can find the infamous general known as Evil Blade, he might be able to reclaim the priceless artifact.


Overall, I have a couple of issues with the book, despite enjoying it. There is a lot of exposition that's kind of dumped on us throughout the book. Exposition is perfectly fine and whenever you make a new world it's important to explain a lot of elements, and I appreciate that Adams has put a lot of thought into his world. Unfortunately I felt a lot of the exposition was sort of dumped on us at once. I feel like it could have been incorporated into the book a little better rather than a third-person omniscient narrator telling us. Again, just my opinion.


Another issue that many people might have with the book is it has a lot of standard fantasy elements. The usual races are all there: human, dwarf, elf, orc, with the added bonus of ogre. The orcs and humans are evil, mainly because they practice slavery and genocide, and a lot of fantasy tropes are invoked. So in some respects parts of The Brotherhood of Dwarves treads the same ground that we've been through countless times before.


What I did like about the book, though, was the character development. Roskin and his ally Red go through significant character development throughout the book, which I appreciated and I found it to be realistic. Red and Roskin are at least developed characters rather than cardboard cut-outs. I sort of disagree with where this book left off but it at least left me willing to read the other books.


Ultimately if you're not really interested in dwarves like I am, you can probably pass this book by. There isn't anything here you can't find somewhere else. If you do like dwarves, though, then I'd recommend picking this book up. I definitely will be reading more books in this series from Adams and hope the books become more refined as the series continues.
- Kalpar
3 1/2 Sheep





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