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Sunday, December 17, 2023

10 Tricks for Writing During the Holidays by Loren Rhoads + giveaway


10 Tricks for Writing During the Holidays
by Loren Rhoads

Sometimes, especially around the holidays, it’s hard to find time to do the creative work you want to do. I’ve used a bunch of tricks to carve out time to write. I hope these will inspire you.

1. Make a list. Whether it’s topics you want to explore or scenes that need to be written, it’s easier to begin writing when you have a prompt.

2. Set an alarm. Promise yourself that you will settle down to write as soon as the alarm goes off. Giving yourself the anticipation of writing time can be inspirational.

3. Set a timer. Anyone can write for 15 minutes. There’s something about the tiniest amount of time pressure that tricks your brain into thinking it’s on a deadline. Start a timer on your computer, phone, or in the kitchen. You might find yourself pounding out the words to beat the bell. If the words are really flowing, you can always add a second 15-minute sprint.

4. Make a date with a friend. Whether you sit down together in a cafe or meet online for a video chat, it really helps to know that someone else is working alongside you. The key is to find someone who will write, rather than chat.

5. Put your headphones on. Many writers make a playlist that they listen to only when they work on a particular project. Listening to the same music every time you write can train your brain to provide inspiration on command.

6. Write somewhere else. If you normally write at a desk, try moving to the sofa or the kitchen table or sitting in bed. The simple act of shifting to new surroundings can shake loose the words.

7. Try a different writing tool. Do you usually write on a laptop? Try writing by hand in a notebook or attach a keyboard to your phone. Some writers swear by word processing keyboards like AlphaSmart or FreeWrite, which only allow you to see a small amount of the text you’re working on. That way you're forced to move forward, rather than editing what you've already done.

8. Write first thing in the morning. It’s tempting to start the day by checking email or scrolling social media, but what might you come up with if you listened to your own thoughts first thing in the morning?

9. Write last thing at night. Take a notebook to bed and draft one more scene before you turn out the light. Do the words feel different as you’re settling in for the night? Maybe your subconscious can solve a writing problem for you in your dreams.

10. Chart your progress. Whether you put a check on the calendar, color in a box on a habit-tracking chart, or note your word count in your planner, record the days you write. It’s addictive to see your progress.

What other tricks have you found for getting the work done? Make your own list, so you'll have some tools to use next time you feel at a loss for words.

Spooky Writer’s Planner
by Loren Rhoads and Emerian Rich
Genre: nonfiction planner
Publisher: HorrorAddicts.net
Date of Publication: November 2020
ISBN: 9798560168698
Number of pages: 361
Cover Artist: Emerian Rich
Get organized this year!

Are you a horror author who wants to take your career to the next level? Do you write dark fantasy, paranormal romance, spooky poetry, or morbid nonfiction?

Would you like to advance farther in the direction of your dreams?

The Spooky Writer's Planner includes:
13 months of monthly and weekly calendars
Monthly goal and recap sheets
Weekly check-ins and note pages
Writing challenges, prompts, and brainstorming pages
Trackers for submissions, pitches, and contacts
Marketing, newsletter, and blog planners
Check-off sheets for website maintenance, social media updates, and expenses

Available in Digital and Print
Book Trailer: https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=SkAATjLixjE
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The quick-download version gives you a digital copy so you can print the pages you need and print multiples of those you'll use the most. Create your own Frankenstein's Monster of a planner! These black & white pages are designed to be printed on 8.5 x 11-inch paper. Put them in a three-ring binder or bind them with disks or a spiral, your choice. Use it year after year after one purchase!

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The Spooky Writer's Planner is perfect-bound with a glossy cover, printed on high-quality 8.5 x 11-inch paper. Everything you need is included in one handy book that you can grab and go!

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Loren Rhoads is the co-author of Lost Angels and Angelus Rose -- the As Above, So Below duology -- with Brian Thomas. Loren's stories about the succubus Lorelei have appeared in the books Sins of the Sirens, Demon Lovers, and Unsafe Words, and most recently online at The Fabulist.


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Sunday, June 10, 2018

Fall in Love with New England Readers/Writers Conference!

Going to reader/author conferences is always fun. If you are looking for one this October give Fall in Love with New England a look!

In the great New England tradition, this conference was started as a grassroots endeavor. It's not part of any big organization or magazine, agency or publisher. We are simply romance authors who want to have fun with (and spoil) our wonderful readers!


Ashlyn Chase established the basics back in 2016, and a lot of authors have contributed countless hours and ideas to make each new conference more superb than the one before it! Let's have tons of fun and make some new friends along the way!

Mid-October is peak foliage season in New Hampshire.

The conference fee* is the same—authors—$119 and readers—$89 includes:
(more information and registrations pages coming soon)

  • A goody bag with schedule and FREE books
  • All workshops and author panels Friday afternoon and Saturday morning
  • Plenty of interaction with your favorite romance authors
  • Loads of giveaway baskets
  • Friday evening Halloween costume contest with prizes
  • Readers "trick or treat" Authors' rooms with a bookmark hanging on the door
  • Free and early admission to the booksigning on Saturday afternoon
Rooms are $119+ per night (double queen or single king). You must book your own room at the Holiday Inn & Suites Nashua, NH. Call the hotel directly at 1-603-888-1551. When you call to make reservations, make sure you mention you are with Fall in Love with New England Readers/Writers Conference!

If you have any questions, email ash@ashlynchase.com.

Thursday, June 9, 2016

ConCarolinas 2016 Recap

2016 Badge Artwork by Rich Molinelli
ConCarolinas 2016
June 3-5
Concord, NC
ConCarolinas is a general multi-genre multi-media convention. We call ourselves a sci-fi convention but in truth we cover all speculative fiction – science fiction, fantasy and horror. We host a variety of fandom related events and guests, including gaming, discussion panels, costume events, music events like SciFi Karaoke, concerts, a charity auction, a short film festival, SCA events, groups celebrating fandoms like Star Wars, Star Trek, Doctor Who and many more. We have a Dealer Room with vendors selling unique fandom related items. At ConCarolinas you will find something for everyone!

One of my favorite things is waiting to see what CeeCee, the panther mascot, will look like each year. 2016 gave us Spock CeeCee by Rich Molinelli. You can check out all the CeeCee art work over the years link

This was my...fourth? year attending ConCarolinas. This is the largest SFF con in NC and it is only 70 minutes from my home. That's a win. Plus this was the first year my 15 year old daughter attended with me!

and yes, I forgot to flip the sign...
I was honored to attend as a guest blogger and editor again this year. But this was my first time having a table in the hallway. I wanted to answer people's blogging and or editing questions. The key to getting noticed and having people stop by your table is to be creative. So Holly and I recreated Lucy's advice stand from the Peanut comics. We rocked the idea, but the design...not so much...it was kind of flawed. Made of cardboard, two mop handles and duct tape, it spent more time flopping over than not. But I have learned from my mistakes and next time will be better!

There are always a wide varitey of panels. The great thing about ConCarolinas is the large literary tract with some great authors like Faith Hunter, Kalayna Price, Gail Martin, Ursula Vernon, Chelsea Quinn Yarbro, David B. Coe...here is a complete list of guests link

It was wonderful seeing all my local NC literary friends. This year I was a slacker and didn't get many pics of me with them. Luckily my daughter took pics of the cosplay!
go to the ConCarolinas FB page to find some other cosplay pics
 
Me and Holly is a Star Wars craft

The highlight for Holly was meeting the comedy troupe The Pineapple Shaped Lamps (YouTube). They did a Batman's Day Off show (spoofing Ferris Bueller) We are now looking for a comedy troupe in our area for Holly to join :)
 
Yes, that is Aquaman!

I got to meet author Calandra Usher for the first time. I saw, but didn't get a pic of Nancy Northcott 
Baaart found some unicorn horns to wear!
Don't judge me!

I always love seeing the Unique Creations booth. She had a Deadpool bracelet...

I also found someone to make the cosplay dress I need. I'm not going to reveal it yet...but stay tuned! Hint: Dark Horse character.

My room was on the top floor! Freaks me out. The hotel is nice, but this year there was a problem with the A.C. in some of the panel rooms...there was one we called the oven. Totally not the Con's fault. This one is on Embassy Suites.

I love this convention. Thank you to Jada Diaz and her staff.

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Saturday, March 12, 2016

The #amwriting Project- Can you contribute?

AmWriting Cover PlaceholderAUTHORS: WILL YOU CONTRIBUTE??? ALL YOU HAVE TO DO IS WRITE A LETTER...
On June 7, 2016, Pure Textuality PR will play publisher once again, this time as we release #amwriting, a charity publication to benefit The Wayne Foundation. And now, we need YOU. #amwriting will be a collection of letters written by authors to their fledgling-writer selves: Knowing what you know now of writing, publishing, and putting your art out into the world, if you could go back to the day you sat down to start typing in your very first manuscript, what words would you offer to yourself? Words of encouragement? Words of advice? Caution against certain pitfalls? Would you change anything about how you got to where you are today? The publishing community is so much bigger than it was before the self-publishing boom and it continues to grow exponentially every day. Unfortunately, it doesn’t come with a handbook or support group. The book is to provide words of encouragement or advice to those just starting out or those who have become discouraged in their art. At Pure Textuality PR, we believe in supporting each other as a community, and we felt this project would be a good way to bring writers together and maybe give some new artists just the right nudge to keep going. 100% of the net proceeds of #amwriting will go to benefit The Wayne Foundation, a charity dedicated to offering aid and services to young women victimized by illegal sexual exploitation and the sexual trafficking of minors. The Wayne Foundation was co-founded by Kevin Smith, writer, director, podcastic guru, and (as I’m sure you’re all *very* sick of hearing by now) my artistic hero.


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Who is involved???
#amwriting has a great list of more than 60 authors so far, including NYT bestselling author Jeaniene Frost! BUT WE WANT MORE!!!! Our goal is to have 100 authors committed to contributing a letter to the project. Author list as of 2/29/2016.
A.D. Ellis Addison Kline Amber Lynn Natusch Amy Joy Lutchen Ashlynne Laynne Becky Flade Beth Dolgner Brandy Dorsch C.L. Foster C.L. Matthews Cassia Brightmore Cecilia London Cherron Riser Cithara Patra Crystal Dawn Dulaney-Glen E.J. Stevens Elizabeth Sharp Ella Col Emersyn Vallis Emily Cyr Emma Nichols Erin Hayes Erynn Crittenden Felicia Starr Gabbie S. Duran Geri Glenn Harlie Williams J. Nichole Parkins J.B. McGee J.M. Gregoire Jeaniene Frost Jess Haines Jessica Cage K.c. Stewart Kasey Belle Katie Kenyhercz Katie Lewington Kendall Grey Kristina Borden L.E. Chamberlin L.U. Ann Leanna Renee Hieber Lexi Ostrow Louisa Lo M. Never M.L. Steinbrunn Mary Crawford Michelle Mcloughney Mike Gonzales Misha Carver Misha Elliott Muriel Garcia Nicole L. Daffurn R.A Mizer Rachel Walter Rebecca Sherwin Renee Dyer Sara Dobie Bauer Scarlett Metal Shakuita Johnson Shannon Bell T.L. Manning Taylor Lavati Tracie Podger


Details, Details, Details!
– All overhead costs such as cover art, formatting, proofing, and marketing will be paid for by Pure Textuality PR. – All letters must be emailed to jena@puretextualitypr.com by May 16, 2016.
– A deadline reminder email will be sent out to all participating authors on 3/1, 4/1, 4/25, 5/9, and a final reminder on 5/16, the date they’re due. Reminders will only go out to the authors who have NOT submitted their letter already. Once you submit your letter, you’re removed from the reminder list.
– #amwriting will be available through all major ebook retailers and in print through Amazon and Createspace.
– 100% of all net proceeds will be donated to The Wayne Foundation. Since Pure Textuality PR is paying for all overhead production costs, there will be nothing held out from the sales.
About The Wayne Foundation
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Mission Statement 

The Wayne Foundation is committed to spreading awareness of CSEC (Commercial Sex Exploitation of Children) DMST (Domestic Minor Sexual Trafficking) occurring within the United States.

Vision Statement
The Wayne Foundation’s vision is for a world without child slavery. We are dedicated to providing direct assistance to those victimized by exploitation.

Drop in Center
The Wayne Foundation operates the third drop in center in Florida recognized by the Department of Children and Family Services. It is located in Charlotte County Florida, and serves clients throughout Southwest Florida. Our target clientele are young women aged 13-25. Our DIC is equipped to provide daily services that include, but are not limited to: Food, New Clothing, Access to Shower, Media Center, Mental Health Assistance, SNAP/ Medicare Benefit sign-up/renewal, Family Counseling, Education Assistance, and Transportation To and From the Center.

Shelter Services
The Wayne Foundation continues to have the goal of providing shelter services to young women victimized by exploitation or trafficking. This is our primary long term objective.

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Saturday, April 18, 2015

Indie BookFest 2015 Information

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Indie BookFest 2015 is a three-day event celebrating indie/hybrid/traditional authors and artists and their freedom of expression. Join some of your favorite authors for three days filled with a book signing, sessions, lunch, author meet and greets, an after party, and great fun!

You won’t want to miss the sessions throughout the day, where panelists will be speaking on a variety of topics relevant to readers, book lovers, and writers.
Indie BookFest 2015 will be held at Caribe Royale in Orlando, Fl., on July 31, August 1, & 2, 2015 The Caribe Royale is located just 1.5 miles from the Walt Disney World® area!
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Over 60 authors representing indie, hybrid and traditional publishing will be featured at this premier author and reader event. Keynote speaker is multi-award winning author Jana Oliver.This weekend is all about readers connecting and finding new authors to love. There are reader panels, a Fan Fare where readers can hang out with the authors, a Gothic Romance party, a gourmet luncheon, Author sponsored parties, and a book signing. View the Schedule of Events$75 Buys an Entire weekend pass which includes all of the parties and the luncheon Saturday!Buy Tickets HERE
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Sunday, June 1, 2014

The Dark Side of Writing: A.M.S. (Author Melt-down Syndrome)

There is a dark side to writing. Most authors suffer in silence in front of their computer screens.
I am talking about A.M.S. (Author Melt-Down Syndrome)

You are not alone and there is help.

Signs you or someone you love might be having a melt-down

Crying – this is the number one symptom of author melt-down. It usually happens in front of their computer, but can happen anywhere at any time. Next time you are at the grocery store and see someone bawling in the bakery section while holding a 12 count of cupcakes, pat them on the back and sing Soft Kitty to them

Head banging – this also happens most often in the privacy of their home, but if you see someone doing this in public don’t make eye contact.

Eye twitch – can last for days or until enough chocolate or alcohol has been consumed.

Fits of hysterical laughter – this is usually happens when crying hasn’t helped. If you see an author doing this in public RUN!

Constantly online – this is a form of avoidance. They foolishly hope the problem will magically go away, but it won’t. Tell them how much you love their writing and send them funny memes or cute animal pictures.

Melt-down Scale
1 (need a hug) – 10 (need bail)

Author melt-down kit
1. Chocolate
2. Mythical beast to cuddle
3. A mirror with the words "I'm an author, and people like me" on it.
4. Tissue
5. Paper bag (for hyperventilation)
6. Coffee
7. ID card with emergency numbers/info in case you are found wandering the streets in a daze
8. Pain reliever
9. Small bottle of whisky*
10. Stress relieving items
11. Warning label
12. Post-its
13. Chill pills
14. Disguise (in case you have a meltdown in public)
15. Tiara (because you are a freaking princess!)
16. Magic wand (worth a shot)

17. Freshening up items
*empty bottle

Saturday, April 26, 2014

Ink Well-one writer's process explained for the reader: Narration Part Two by Adrienne Wilder


Narration Part Two

In my last post I addressed narration and how it is used to convey information to the reader about how the character speaks and how the character interacts with the environment around him.

In this post I want to touch on how to use narration to describe a character to the audience and to convey the thought process experienced by the character. I am specifically going to use the romance genre for this example because this is one of the most important aspects of that genre.

Part One:
A character’s characteristics.

If you have read more than twenty novels in your life I can guarantee you there is at least one where the description of a character is delivered in catalog fashion or through the character’s self observations when looking in a mirror.

While neither one of these methods is wrong, they do tend to be overdone. So I thought I might present a few alternate ways that kind of information can be delivered to the audience.

All right. Imagine the character you want to describe, and feel free to be as detailed or as vague as you choose in regards to his physical characteristics as well as the clothes he/she is wearing. Now that you have your character in your head let’s have him/her walk into an old book store, with narrow aisles, rickety, furniture, bad lighting, and a white long-haired cat.

Now, as I introduce my character you, I want you to put your own character in his/her place and picture in your mind how they would interact with the environment.

The bells on the door clanged against the frame.

Sagging bookshelves went from the floor to the ceiling and lamps on side tables tossed out yellow light. The red and gold interior of the old store was just as warm as it had appeared through the window.

Oliver pulled his hood back and stomped his feet on the mat.

A slow fog crept of the edge of his glasses and he wiped them off with the hem of his shirt.

“Hello?”

He took a couple of steps and the top of his head grazed the overhang at the edge of the foyer.

Spider webs tangled in his bangs. He slapped them away and they stuck to his fingers. He scrubbed them off on his jeans.

“Is anyone here?”

Water droplets traced his steps to the edge of the carpet. A coat tree stood in front of the window. He took off his duster and hung it on the peg next to a dark wool overcoat.

A bump to his shin sent Oliver stumbling back. His foot caught the edge of the coat tree. He made a grab for the chair sitting next to it, but wound up slamming his elbow into the arm. It skittered a few feet and he landed on a pair of rain boots. The wool overcoat slipped off the coat tree and blanketed his head.

He peeled it back. A pink nose, and a bushel of whiskers danced in front of a pair of bright green eyes. The cat rubbed the length of his body on the front of Oliver’s sweater leaving behind a streak of white hairs.

He sneezed and the cat bolted.

He sneezed again and his eyes watered.

Oliver was sure the next one would cost him a lung.

“Are you all right?”

The fog on Oliver’s glasses returned and the man looking down at him was reduced to a hazy blur.

“Fine.” He slid off the lump of shoes and dumped the coat on the floor.

“I must have been in the back when you came in. Here, let me help.” The guy offered Oliver a hand. At least, he was pretty sure it was a hand. He rubbed his thumb over the right lens.

Fingerprints weren’t much better than the fog.

Oliver took the offering and pushed off the wall. The sole of his loafer slid on the tile, throwing him off balance.

The stranger made a surprised yelped as he was yanked over. His elbow caught Oliver on the chin, his knee landed between his legs. Someone’s arm, Oliver didn’t know if it was his or the other man’s, hit the coat tree.

Oliver’s duster softened the landing, but one of the pegs from the falling coat tree hit him in the temple with enough force he’d have a knot in the morning.

The weight of the stranger settled on Oliver’s chest. His nose was so close to Oliver’s he could count the freckles on his cheeks. They matched his strawberry blond hair perfectly.

“Uh…” The stranger stared wide-eyed.

“Sorry about that.”

Neither one moved. Oddly enough, Oliver wasn’t in all that big of a hurry for the guy to move. Having the weight of the other man, pressing down on him, was actually…quite…nice.

The cat walked by and flicked its tail right along the stranger’s cheek.


Now granted, I haven’t revealed every detail of my character. My personal preference is to sprinkle bits of information through out the manuscript, but in this one page, we have learned a few things about the characters.

Oliver is out late in the day or evening. But we know it’s dark. How? Only when it’s dark can you see well through the average store window.

*Display windows (usually clothing) are different because they have backgrounds to reflect backlight so that people can see the items on display.

We know Oliver is dressed in a duster (long coat) jeans, and a sweater. We also know the sweater is dark because the cat’s white hairs showed.

Oliver wears glasses.

He’s allergic to cat.

Oliver is taller than average because his head grazed the overhang.

He most likely has a large frame since he was heavy enough to pull the other guy over.

Oliver is gay or at least bi, considering he finds the awkward position with the other guy pleasant. If he was straight and just not bothered by the situation, I would not have stated how he was in no hurry for the guy to move and found his body against his, nice.

So far this is what we know about the guy in the bookstore.

He either owns the store or works there. Why own? Most commercial stores would not allow a pet and most small book stores are privately owned. He has blond hair and freckles.

He probably owns a cat.

The guy in the shop is at least average height but not taller, otherwise he would not have landed nose to nose with Oliver given the position of the landing put them hip to hip. Also, if he was the same height, the cobwebs Oliver ran into would have already been knocked down by him going in and out of the store.

He is lighter than Oliver. The guy in the shop wasn’t heavy enough to stay on his feet when Oliver slipped.

His sexual orientation is still unknown but we know he’s at least not insecure and made uneasy by the awkward situation.

While you don’t have every single detail of the characters, that’s a lot to learn about someone in a couple hundred words.

At the same time you are learning about the character’s physical attributes you are learning about the environment. The interior of the store doesn’t have florescent lighting.

It’s clean but has worn out furniture.

It has cobwebs on or close to, the ceiling.

The store is heavily shadowed. Remember it’s clean, but there were cobwebs near or on the ceiling which means they are most likely not visible from the floor.

The interior is decorated in red and gold. Either a rug or carpet on the floor or the upholstery of the furniture is red and gold or a combination of both.

It has some tile flooring.

There are windows around the front.

There is a coat tree.

Again, that’s not a detailed list of what the store looks like, but it is a lot of information. And it is also a reasonable amount of information the average person would perceive when walking into a place.

Now, if Oliver had an above average or even heightened sense of observation, that could have been conveyed to the reader by adding in details, people would not normally notice at first glance.

Let’s say a dead moth in the window, a frayed edge on the rug, that the upholstery on some of the furniture is newer than others. That the bookstore shows some signs it was a different kind of store before it was a bookstore.

If Oliver had a job as an antique dealer/collector or is at least knowledgeable, he could notice the year of the furniture, maybe even appreciate the lamps or not appreciate them because of their make. The rug, or again, the construction of the store (if he specialized in old buildings.)

If Oliver is a book collector he could recognize or at least have his curiosity raised about some of the books he can see on the shelves.

Once again, this is a lot of information and or details that can be conveyed to the audience without having to catalog them or tell the reader what Oliver does, sees, and even some of what he knows.

Emotional State:
Emotional state and or thought process is another important story aspect that can be delivered to the audience without having to tell them what the character is experiencing. These are also some of the more difficult traits to convey to a reader without telling them. In some situation a reader will have to be told what the character is feeling because it’s cleaner. Other times if some work is put into the scene it can be done by showing.

In most genres this kind of detail is given in a moderate amount. In the romance genre the emotional and or mental state of a character is often given priority over the character’s interactions with the environment.

My personal preference is about 50/50 for this, but that’s just me. Many romance readers want a lot of detail when it comes to emotion/mental state. But, as always, do what you feel comfortable with.

Again, I am using the romance genre as an example because that is a genre where you will find a concentration of these aspects within a few pages or paragraphs.

All right, so lets begin where we left off. Our characters have just met each other, and now we are moving on to the emotional/mental state.

We already know a little bit thanks to that next to the last paragraph.

Continued:
Neither one of them moved. Oddly enough, Oliver wasn’t in all that big of a hurry for the guy to move. Having the weight of the other man, pressing down on him, was actually…quite…nice.

The cat walked by and flicked it’s tail right along the stranger’s cheek.

A flush crept up his neck and he crawled backwards freeing Oliver from the prison of his body.

No not a prison, because that was a place a man would want to escape and if Oliver had his way, escaping would have been the last thing on his list.

“Uh…” The stranger fumbled with the coat rack and the over coat, getting tangled up more than moving it out of the way.

Oliver got to his feet and extended a hand. “Need help?”

The stranger sat there on his knees staring at the mess of fabric balled up in his fists.

“I promise, I won’t bite.” Oliver smiled and for the first time in months it felt natural. His heart still grieved, but at least the world was getting easier to bear. The man in front of him was a kick in the ass reminder that despite the bad there were wonderful moments left to be experienced.

The stranger took Oliver’s hand. The slightest tremor ran up Oliver’s arm from where they touched. He pulled the man to his feet.

It was then he looked up. The deep amber of his eyes was darker than rich honey. Would he taste as sweet?

The warmth of flesh to flesh contact, stirred heat in Oliver’s groin. He let go of the stranger’s hand before he embarrassed himself.


So here we are, another half a page and we’ve learned a bit more about Oliver.

It’s been confirmed that he’s gay/bi because of the obvious sexual attraction he has to the other man. Oliver is confident about himself. He finds the vulnerability of the stranger arousing. He will most likely make a pass at the other man, at some time in this story.

We also learn that something has happened in his life, fairly recently that has hurt him emotionally. At this point we don’t know who, but we can gather from his emotions/mental state they must have been close and they most likely died or at least left his life.

We also learn more about the stranger. He’s shy or at least intimidated by Oliver. Most likely he finds Oliver attractive because of the prolonged contact. He blushes easily or at least in a slightly awkward, potentially sexual or implied sexual situation. Inexperienced? Bad experience? Afraid of his feelings? We don’t know yet.

But those are more details that can be woven into a story and delivered to the reader in a way that will propel the story forward and not stop it to list details. The amount of detail in either of these examples is a matter of preference. Some will want more, some less.

The important thing to remember is, when writing a novel, you have at least a couple hundred pages to tell the reader everything they need to know about the character, so, there is no rush to deliver it all in the first page, pages, or even chapter. Think of these traits like chocolate chips. Too many and you have a melted mess, too few and you only have cookie and no chocolaty goodness.

Use these details to keep the reader intrigued and don’t feel pressured to put every characteristic in a story. Many readers like filling in the blanks and seeing the characters as they would like to see them.


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Be sure to check out Adrienne's best selling trilogy My Brother's Keeper a m/m romance and supernatural dark thriller.

Tuesday, February 18, 2014

Interview: composers and writers Jon and Al Kaplan talk Zombeavers!

Are you a campy horror movie lover? If you are then you have probably heard about or seen the trailer for Zombeavers! Did it give you the warm and fuzzies too? The three guys responsible have been extremely busy, but Jon and Al Kaplan were kind enough to make some time to visit the Flock! These two brothers are talented and hilarious. You will have to visit their three YouTube channels (yes! it takes three channels to contain the epicness).

Welcome to the Flock! *hands Jon and Al each a Solo cup of Kool-Aid* Be sure to drink it all.*twitch,twitch*

Sharon: You guys are composers, lyricists and comedy writers. You wrote the score to two SyFy classics, Piranhaconda and Dinocroc Vs. Supergator. What made you want to write a screenplay for a campy horror movie?
Jon Kaplan: We weren't getting enough scoring jobs so we thought we might as well try to get a movie made and then score it. Seriously. And one of the reasons we went with Zombeavers is because it was the kind of thing that producers might actually let us score, since we'd already done the SyFy stuff you mention.
Al Kaplan: Also, our writing partner Jordan Rubin was very interested in doing a zombie movie. We love zombie movies but felt they were kind of played out at the time, so we chose a joke version that appealed to us. We'd batted around the idea of Zombeavers for years, but for a bunch of different reasons it was finally the right time to do it.


Sharon: The trailer for Zombeavers has gone viral, and so I have to ask the obvious question, WTF? And when can we see it?!
J: The preview is actually pretty good, and for a long time the title and concept would usually get a reaction—whether positive or negative—so we're not that surprised with this response. That said, we have no idea when, how or where the movie itself will become available.
A: Hopefully soon.

Sharon: If readers check out your website they will find you two write musicals based on movies that qualify as classics in my book. So which movie-based musical are you most proud of?
A: I choose Neeson Season. It's one of the better impressions and it has added weight because there's a video of Liam Neeson watching it.

J: It'd be hard to not go with Silence! or 24: Season Two, since those are full length, but assuming you mean the one-off YouTube musicals, I'd choose John Carpenter's The Thing: The Musical.
Sharon: You guys are brothers. Which one of you was the favorite child?
J: Our sister Caroline.

Sharon: What is the nerdiest thing you own?
A: I have a book called Making Ghostbusters. It's got the script with annotated comments by Dan Aykroyd and Harold Ramis, and a lot of unused ghost concepts by Bernie Wrightson
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J: An abstract drawing by film composer Howard Shore, which he doodled on a paper table cloth while bored at a restaurant with us and a few other folks in 2004. I surreptitiously tore the artwork from the table on the way out, and it's now framed on my desk.

Sharon: Which Disney movie character would you like date?
J: Ariel when she has legs. Or if you include cartoon animals, then Cleo from Pinocchio.
A: I also choose Ariel, and though she's not a Disney character, Mrs. Brisby from Secret of N.I.M.H. is very sexy.


Sharon: When the zombie apocalypse happens (and we know it will!) who do you want to have your back? (Fictional characters count too) Would either of you trip the other to get away?
J: Zhang Ziyi. We are too slow to even bother tripping each other.


Rapid Fire

Sharon: Godzilla or King Kong?
J: Godzilla.

A: King Kong.

Sharon: Coke or Pepsi?
J: Coke.

A: Coke.
*Sharon's heart breaks*



Sharon: stabbed or shot?
J: Shot.
A: Shot.


Sharon: bull rider or bull fighter?
J: Bull rider.

A: Bull fighter.

Sharon: Monty Python or Saturday Night Live (original cast members)?
J: Monty Python.

A: Monty Python.

Sharon: Thank you so much for taking the time! Anything you would like to say before the Kool-Aid…er, you take a nap?
J: Thanks for having us!

A: Don't forget to send me a copy!


Zombeavers (2014)
85 min - Action | Comedy | Horror 

2014 (USA)
ZOMBEAVERS is an action-packed horror/comedy in which a group of college kids staying at a riverside cabin are menaced by a swarm of deadly zombie beavers. A weekend of sex and debauchery soon turns gruesome as the beavers close in on the kids. Riding the line between scary, sexy and funny, the kids are soon fighting for their lives in a desperate attempt to fend off the hoard of beavers that attack them in and around their cabin.- Written by Anonymous

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Jon Kaplan and Al Kaplan are award-winning composers, lyricists, comedy writers and brothers. In a career spanning two decades, the Kaplans have found success and fame creating musical versions of classic films including Silence of the Lambs (Silence! The Musical; 2002) and various Arnold Schwarzenegger movies such as Conan the Barbarian, Predator andCommando. Their most successful projects were born on the internet, with early viral sensation Silence! The Musical expanding into a live stage production in London, New York City and Los Angeles.