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Saturday, July 23, 2022

Movie Review: The Gray Man (2022) Netflix

The Gray Man (2022)
Release Date (Theaters): Jul 15, 2022
Release Date (Streaming): Jul 22, 2022
Director: Anthony Russo, Joe Russo
Writer: Joe Russo, Christopher Markus, Stephen McFeely
Cast: Ryan Gosling, Chris Evans, Ana de Armas, Regé-Jean Page, Billy Bob Thornton
Runtime: 2h 9m
Distributor: Netflix
Rating: PG-13 (Strong Language|Strong Violence)
Genre: Action
When the CIA's top asset -- his identity known to no one -- uncovers agency secrets, he triggers a global hunt by assassins set loose by his ex-colleague.

The Gray Man, based on the book 
by Mark Greaney, is action-packed from start to finish in typical Russo fashion. Chris Evans and Ryan Gosling were just the frostings on the exploding cake.

The storyline is full of action movie clichés and predictable but it's still a lot of fun! Chris Evans' character isn't deep... just an over-the-top bad-guy psychopath. But they don't try to make him a serious character evidenced by the porn-stache. 

My husband and I were entertained and glad we watched. There are 12 Gray Man books so this could be the start of a franchise. I'm there for it like Bourne and Jack Reacher.

If you enjoy blow'em-up movies with outrageous car chases then you want to see this one.

My husband and I give it 4 "Gray" Sheep





SharonS

Saturday, August 20, 2016

Ink Well: One writer’s process explained for the reader with Andy Peloquin

Ink Well: One writer’s process explained for the reader with Andy Peloquin

Writing a short story, novella, or novel 100% free of errors is, I'd wager, COMPLETELY IMPOSSIBLE! I'd be willing to bet that not even the greats (Brandon Sanderson, John Grisham, J.K. Rowling, and G.R.R. Martin) write novels that are perfect. There's a reason that line editors, developmental editors, and proofreaders are a part of the publishing process: more eyes = less risk of errors and mistakes.
But, as a writer, I've learned the best way to wow your publisher is to deliver work that is as clean and free of mistakes as possible. That means ironing out all the:
Plot holes
Character inconsistencies
Time inconsistencies
Grammar mistakes
Punctuation mistakes
Head-hopping (switching POV)
POV mistakes
Anachronisms
and anything else that isn't correct…

The last book I submitted to my publisher received fewer than 20 edits. The editors were amazed at how clean the book was. 
So how did I get my book from rough first draft to clean, neat submission? That was quite a lengthy process, one that involved the steps listed below:

Step 1: Write the damned thing. This first step is always the most important. Simply use your words to paint the pictures you see in your head, and take your character along a journey from "In the beginning" to "The End". For me, it's easier to focus on the story rather than the nitty gritty details of location, so I just include the important details. The color of the palace, the specific terrain, and the other details can be fleshed out later. For now, I just need to tell the character's story.

Step 2: Send the book to alpha readers. Alpha readers are people who read the rough draft and critique the story at large. They'll look at plot, pacing, the three-act structure, and overall character progression. They point out all the mistakes (of which there will be many) in your writing. I give Alpha readers around 6 weeks to slice and dice the book, during which time I'll work on other projects.

Step 3: Draft 2. This is the second draft, the draft that I focus on making as perfect as possible. I'll edit the book according to the notes given me by my alpha readers, and I'll flesh out all the details of location, settings, surroundings, etc. This is the time to tighten up the writing as if I was going to publish it the moment I finished with the draft. I make it as complete and cohesive as possible.

Step 4: Off to the beta readers. These readers also pay attention to plot, pacing, and structure, but I have a couple who focus more on the characters, the grammar and punctuation, the showing/telling, and other nitty gritty details. I've already worked the story to where I want it to be, so now I'm looking for notes that will help me tighten up what I believe to be the final story. Once again, this is about 6 weeks of slicing and dicing, during which time I do not touch the book--instead, I work on other projects.

Step 5: Fixing it up. The beta readers always have lots of comments, most of which are focused on line by line changes rather than entire chapters that need to be excised. I take their changes and comments into account, and make the book conform to their recommendations as much as possible. Of course, I don't blindly do what they say, but I'll talk each item out to find out exactly why they recommended the change. 

Step 6: Read. I mean PHYSICALLY, not on my computer. I'll take my book to Office Depot, print it out, get it all nicely bound in a notebook, and sit on my couch with a pen and mark the heck out of it. I read each sentence to ensure the book flows nicely, with sentences neither too long nor short. I want smooth reading, not choppy or over-long paragraphs. Now that I've printed it out, I see how the book will look in its physical format, and it's easier to spot mistakes that I hadn't noticed on my computer screen. As I mark the book, I'll make the changes to the digital file, until it's as clean as humanly possible. 

Step 7: Submit.
All in all, this takes about 6-9 months of my life, with 4-6 months spent working on just that one book. But, by the time I finally click the "Send" button on my submission, it's been through four layers of preliminary edits, with 6 or 7 sets of eyes going over it and finding as many mistakes as they can. This is how I ensure my editors get as clean and perfect a manuscript as possible. 

The Last Bucelarii (Book 2): Lament of the Fallen
by Andy Peloquin

August 21, 2015
340 pages
A faceless, nameless assassin. A forgotten past. The Hunter of Voramis--a killer devoid of morals, or something else altogether? (The Last Bucelarii--dark fantasy with a look at the underside of human nature) 

The Hunter of Voramis is no more.
Alone with the bloodthirsty voices in his head, fleeing the pain of loss, he has one objective: travel north to find Her, the mystery woman who plagues his dreams and haunts his memories.

When he stumbles upon a bandit attack, something within urges him to help. His actions set him at odds with the warrior priests commanded to hunt down the Bucelarii.

Left for dead, the Hunter must travel to Malandria to recover his stolen birthright. There, he is inexorably drawn into direct conflict with the Order of Midas, the faceless, nameless group of magicians that holds the city in a grip of terror. All while struggling to silence the ever-louder voice in his mind that drives him to kill.

From feared asassin to wretched outcast, the Hunter's journey leads him to truths about his forgotten past and the Abiarazi he has pledged to hunt. His discoveries will shed light on who he really is…what he really is.

Fans of Joe Abercrombie, Brandon Sanderson, and Brent Weeks will love the Hunter…

Andy Peloquin: Lover of All Things Dark and Mysterious.

Andy Peloquin--a third culture kid to the core--has loved to read since before he could remember. Sherlock Holmes, the Phantom of the Opera, and Father Brown are just a few of the books that ensnared his imagination as a child.

When he discovered science fiction and fantasy through the pages of writers like Edgar Rice Burroughs, J.R.R Tolkien, and Orson Scott Card, he was immediately hooked and hasn't looked back since.

Reading—and now writing—is his favorite escape, and it provides him an outlet for his innate creativity. He is an artist; words are his palette.

His website is a second home for him, a place where he can post his thoughts and feelings--along with reviews of books he finds laying around the internet.

10 Things You Need to Know About Me:
1. Hot wings, ALWAYS!
2. I never forget a face, but rarely remember a name.
3. I'm a head taller than the average person (I'm 6' 6")
4. Marvel > DC
5. I was born in Japan, and lived there until the age of 14.
6. Selena Gomez, Skrillex, Simon & Garfunkel, Celine Dion, and Five Finger Death Punch are all in my writing playlist.
7. Aliens are real, but it's self-centered of us to believe that they would come to visit Earth.
8. Watching sports: suck. Playing sports: EPIC!
9. I earned a purple belt in Karate/Hapkido/Taekwondo.
10. I dislike most Christmas music, aside from Trans-Siberian Orchestra.

A Few of My Favorite Things
Favorite Books: The Gentlemen Bastards by Scott Lynch, The Stormlight Archives by Brandon Sanderson, Sherlock Holmes by A.C. Doyle, Warlord of Mars by E.R. Burroughs
Favorite Songs: Wrong Side of Heaven by Five Finger Death Punch, Prayer by Disturbed, I'm an Albatraoz by AronChupa, Look Down from Les Miserables, Shatter Me by Lindsay Sterling and Lizzi Hale
Favorite Movies: 300, Red Cliff, Shoot Em Up, Love Actually, Princess Bride
Favorite Comics: Anything with Deadpool, Wolverine or Doop in it
Favorite Foods: Hot Wings, Meat-Lover's Salad, A good sandwich (made by me), Yaki Soba, Sushi
Favorite TV Shows: The Flash, Daredevil, Agents of S.H.I.E.L.D., Hawaii Five-0, Brooklyn 99, Firefly (too soon!), The Last Ship, The Walking Dead, Game of Thrones


"Creative, gritty, and beautifully dark...fantasy addicts will love it!" -- Peter Story, author of Things Grak Hates -- http://peterjstory.com/

What Reviewers are saying...
"The fantasy world has a compelling new antihero…the Hunter will terrify and captivate you." - Eve A Floriste, author of Fresh Cut

"From the first words on the page this fantasy holds the reader spellbound even after the book is finished…his character is very well-defined even if his past is a mystery. Root for an assassin? Oh, yes, one must!" -- Carol Conley, for InDTale Magazine

"Oh the carnage! Fantastic bloodthirsty carnage! The fight scenes in this book were fast-paced, detailed and thrilling. I love a good sword fight and there is plenty of that here." -- Ami L. Hart

"One could get lost in this novel for its twisting plots, seemingly endless imagination, dark yet irresistible characters, or the mind-numbing paradox of its simultaneously dark and romantic world. One could follow the long and winding road of the dusky, fierce protagonist and fight tooth and nail not to sympathize with him. One could dance in the dizzying, intricate circles of Peloquin's neo-mythology, or even basque in the black sunlight of a well-crafted gothic novel that both entertains and enlightens." -- Jesse G. Christiansen

Saturday, July 16, 2016

Comic Review: LADY KILLER 2 #1 from Dark Horse Comics

LADY KILLER 2 #1
Writer: Joelle Jones 
Artist: Joelle Jones 
Colorist: Michelle Madsen 
Cover Artist: Joelle Jones
Dark Horse Comics
Genre: Action/Adventure
August 03, 2016 
Format: FC, 32 pages; Miniseries 
Price: $3.99 
UPC: 7 61568 00045 0 00111
Joelle Jones multi Eisner award nominated series continues!

The killer housewife is back! The Schuller family has moved to Cocoa Beach, Florida, where life carries on as usual. Josie continues to juggle Tupperware parties, her kids, and a few human heads. However, when someone from her past tails her on a hit, she may be in for more than she bargained for.

“Lady Killer is worth its weight in gold for the art alone, but the enigmatic Josie Schuller is the real appeal.”—Newsarama


I love dark humor in my comics. Housewife Josie Schuller is an assassin. The humor comes from her balancing her duties as the perfect wife and mother of twin girls with that of a brutal assassin. Often times her two worlds collide in a humorous manner...like having to use her housecleaning skills after dismembering someone in a bathroom. She is the queen of rolling with the punches...or clawed hammers to the head.

In volume 2, Josie and her family have moved and she is now a freelance assassin and Tupperware representative. But she is running into quite a few glitches along the way. Issue #1 shows how Josie is adapting to her new job through her inner monologue...like having to clean up her own messes, and a mother-in-law that knows her secret, but still managing to keep her upbeat, perky outlook on life (read: sociopath). She gives us the seven rules of going into business for yourself as she kills, then struggles to hide a body in high heels and pearls none the less! We don't know where the story is heading yet, but a mysterious man has shown up on the last page.
This is an ultra-violent comic, but the artwork is amazing. Jolle Jones snagged 3 2016 Eisner Award nominations (Best Limited Series, Best Penciller/Inker and Best Cover Artist).

4 "seals in the freshness" Sheep




SharonS

Thursday, April 30, 2015

Double Book Review: Raising Cain (The Key Guardians #1) by Kelli Ireland

Raising Cain (The Key Guardians #1)
by Kelli Ireland

Paperback, 378 pages
Published April 7th 2015
Hiding places are scarce when both Heaven and Hell intend to find you.

Dani Fayel’s backbreaking job as a stable hand at The Freaks’ Fair isn’t glamorous, but for someone looking to keep to the shadows? It’s perfect. Neither paranormal freaks nor human norms ever notice her. But when Dani is forced to either let a child die in order to maintain her anonymity or choose to save him and risk being discovered, she finds herself unwillingly thrust into the spotlight.

Cain, Hell’s premier assassin and a predatory incubus, is close to fulfilling his final contract and earning his freedom. Hired by the Archangel of Death to find his daughter, Cain follows her trail to the Fair. He works undercover, certain his mark is inside one of the portable canopies or traveling cages. Dead or alive, she equals his ticket to freedom.

When Cain’s objective is divulged, Dani realizes she can’t outrun her destiny. As the fabled Key—the one soul with absolute free will who is tied to the three realms of Heaven, Earth and Hell—only she is capable of opening the gates for the Four Horsemen of the Apocalypse. Whoever frees the Horsemen allegedly commands them. Now both Heaven and Hell are vying for her allegiance, and there are no limits as to how dirty they’ll fight to obtain it. With Hell raining indiscriminate chaos as Heaven maneuvers its players around her, Dani realizes her would-be assassin may be the only man capable of helping her survive.


Review by Jeanie G
The story caught my attention from the first chapter!

Dani is a very independent, snarky character that is easy to fall in love with for the reader. She shows great compassion with lots of moxie. Cain discovers that she is the "Key" he is seeking but is having trouble carrying out the contract and delivering her to her father Sahill of the underworld. He protects her through many harrowing battles and even helps her develop her Archangel talents by throwing her off a roof! Nice guy huh?

There seems to be many concurrent themes evolving in this book. Self preservation, friendship, loyalty, greed, power with a suggestion of sex and romance are a few. The first half of the story moved along at a great pace and developed the characters well. I was riveted by the story and couldn't put the book down. The second half became a little stagnant with many scenes of "capture, escape, battles, waiting, repeat" along with the introduction of new characters. At times I felt as if the story seemed to get lost in the action but the author does bring it home in the finale.

The ending leaves you thinking there will be more adventures for Cain and Dani coming in future episodes. The relationship of Dani and Cain is intriguing and makes you want to keep reading until you come to a "Happily Ever After" place!

I give this story 4 "hopeful" sheep









Review by Bianca Greenwood
In the world of this urban fantasy, paranormal creatures exit alongside humans. Select paranormal beings are on display to entertain the norms in ‘The Freaks Fair,’ a travelling circus of sorts that cashes in on human curiosity. Dani has enjoyed an insular, fairly anonymous existence as the fair’s stable hand; with secrets to keep she cannot afford to draw attention. But when Cain, the fair’s newest muscle-bound employee, starts to keep tabs on the introverted Dani, she is forced to confront some fantastic facts, quickly.

With her first book in this series, Ireland has created a fast-paced, entertaining hook for her readers. I don’t think anything particularly novel or inventive is occurring here, but the book is well crafted, the action non-stop, and the characters likeable. I devoured most of this book in one sitting. I liked Ireland’s colourful diction and dialogue and appreciated her well-written descriptions.

There is, however, a fine line between tension and frustration. I grew slightly weary of the Cain-Dani cat and mouse game. The pace of these characters’ relationship is at odds with the fast pace of the story’s action. The burgeoning relationship between Dani and Cain, along with a tonne of unanswered questions, poises readers to anxiously anticipate book two. I hope Ireland effectively capitalizes on the wave of anticipation and expediently releases book two. I wouldn’t want my friendly frustration to lead to forgetfulness.

Four Sheep


  



              

About the Author:
Kelli Ireland has the heart of gypsy. She credits it to having lived all over the United States, from the West Coast to the East, from densely populated urban metropolises to a cattle ranch in very rural New Mexico.

When the Fates decided to clip the thread that had tied her to an office in corporate America for more than a decade, Kelli found herself with an immense amount of time on her hands. For two years, she hid from the world as she read All The Books. With her little house bursting at the seams, her husband bought her first an e-reader and, second, a laptop. “Write,” he said. “It used to make you happy.”

Kelli currently lives in the heart of the south where all foods are considered fry-able and bugs die only to be reincarnated in blood-sucking triplicate. It’s ironic, really, seeing as she hates the heat. Her house is occupied by two parrots (Cockatoo and African Gray, both of whom talk…incessantly), two dogs (a narcoleptic bullmastiff and a freakishly smart pound hound with anxiety issues), one Blue Russian terror and a Maine Coon cat to rule them all. Oh, and her husband. But really, they just live there to ensure the animals are tended to in the manner to which they’ve all become accustomed.

Saturday, November 1, 2014

Movie Review: John Wick (2014)

John Wick
Rating:R (for strong and bloody violence throughout, language and brief drug use)
Genre:Action & Adventure
Directed By:Chad Stahelski
Written By:Derek Kolstad
In Theaters:Oct 24, 2014 WideBox Office:$14.4M
Runtime:1 hr. 36 min.
Cast: Keanu Reeves, Adrianne Palicki, Willem Dafoe, John Leguizamo
LionsGate Entertainment - Official Site
An ex-hitman comes out of retirement to track down the gangsters that took everything from him. With New York City as his bullet-riddled playground, JOHN WICK (Keanu Reeves) is a fresh and stylized take on the "assassin genre". (C) Lionsgate

Now that is how you take out the trash! No talking, just double and triple tap. I'll go ahead an confess, something about Kenau Reeves just makes me go squeee. I love his rough breathy voice...okay back to the movie...
John Wick is one big kill-fest with very little dialogue. The movie starts with John having to bury his wife of four years. Then somebody breaks into his house beats him up steals his car and...gonna give a spoiler but you need to be prepared for this...kills his puppy. Yes, you will get misty eyed. Then it is time for retribution. The action sequences have a video game feel to them as John mows down the bad guys. 
Don't get attached
Pulp action and dry wit, this movie is exactly what the trailer promises. If you are looking for character development go watch Bridget Joan's Diary. John Wick ain't about that life. He's the freaking boogieman (yeah, they actually call him that) 

You can watch it on TV and not lose much, but my husband and I agree that if you enjoy the movie experience, Keanu Reeves, and revenge films then this is worth the matinee price.

4 "Yeah, I'm thinking I'm back" Sheep



SharonS

Friday, May 11, 2012

Sheep Review: Deliverance (Mortal Path #3) by Dakota Banks

A demon's assassin for centuries, Maliha Crayne has gone rogue, determined to save a life for every one she's destroyed in order to free herself from an eternity of enslavement, damnation, and excruciating torment. But as the powers that sustained her in the past fade, she is wary of trusting those closest to her-especially her lover, Jake. Should Maliha listen to her heart or the alarms going off in her head? Then her closest friends begin to disappear, one by one. Amid her anger, suspicion, and sorrow, she feels her life spiraling out of control.

Worse still, a beautiful, Renaissance murderess is recruiting Maliha as her new assassin. Maliha is turning into a lethal puppet with an evil Immortal pulling the strings, forced to kill innocents or see her missing friends die horribly. Suddenly trapped in a moral no-man's land, Maliha is damned if she does and damned if she doesn't…and time is rapidly running out.

I love this kind of urban fantasy, gritty with tons of action and violence. The villain in this one, Elizabeth, is an ageless sociopath who is truly evil. (If you get a little squeamish you might want to skim over a few scenes.) This series reminds me a little of Mission Impossible with all the high tech gadgets Maliha and her team have, while the prose has a crime novel feel. I don’t think you should ever piss Ms. Banks off cause she knows way too much about assassins.

Here is a little background about the series. Nothing spoiler-ish, it just gives you an idea of who Maliha is. You can even skip it and go to the next paragraph…
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300 years ago Maliha was living in the American Colonies where she was accused of being a witch and burned at the stake. Her rage and need for vengeance brought Rabishu, one of only seven Sumerian demons left, to Maliha. He offered her immortality, blinding speed, strength, instantaneous healing, and a chance for revenge. She would become one of the Ageless, but the price was her soul would belong to Rabishu and she had to become his personal assassin in the human world. She became one of the best Ageless, but somewhere along the line she realized she couldn’t do it anymore and went rogue, which meant she no longer listened to her demon and chose the Mortal Path. To make up for all the lives she has taken, the god Anu put a scale on her abdomen that has all the lives she has taken on one side and all the lives she has saved on the other. She now uses her skills to take evil out of the world and balance her scale. There was a price for going rogue, though. She is slowly losing her ageless powers and has started aging. She is also trying to collect seven shards of a lens that will allow her to read the Tablet of Overlord and with it she can eliminate the last seven demons from existence.
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Maliha has spent most of her 300 years not trusting anyone, but in her quest to balance her scales and collect the shards she realizes she needs help. The first two books show how she has begun to trust a select few as well as letting someone into her heart. In Sacrifice she spends most the book questioning the loyalties of those she trusted and Banks did a great job of conveying her emotional turmoil so even I was conflicted. When Maliah was betrayed, I felt like I had been too. Where the first two books are action-oriented this one instead focuses on Maliha’s emotional growth. Since taking the Mortal Path she is finding out what that really means and must decide if she is strong enough to stay on her path.

This series is about Maliha and her journey to become human as well as being a kick-ass action thriller. There is a small romantic element to the story because that is part of being human. I wouldn’t call this a romance, but there is enough to make Maliah seem real and her love interest is quite swoon-worthy.

The first few chapters are more for catching people up on the first two books and were kind of slow, but once the villain was introduced things took off and there were some surprising twists and turns. As far as storylines go this wasn’t my favorite of the three books, but I liked the ending, the advancement of the main story arc and the direction it seems to be heading. This is a well -written series and if you like urban fantasy without all the romance drama and lots of action and blood then you need to give it a try.

4 “what’s in the box” Sheep




Dakota Banks
I live on the western fringe of St. Louis, Missouri with my husband. Our two sons, one adopted from Peru and the other from Ethiopia, are in college. My cats Snickers and Marble sometimes ghostwrite my books. Good stuff, too, if you speak Cat.



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